tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3463250069567625977.post7008159275306764929..comments2017-11-17T10:39:11.983+13:00Comments on Amelia: My Animated StoryGlenbrae Blogshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16371474947404269992noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3463250069567625977.post-73965715755904143672017-11-17T10:39:11.983+13:002017-11-17T10:39:11.983+13:00Hi Amelia,
Your Story is good but I think you shou...Hi Amelia,<br />Your Story is good but I think you should work on getting the right timing and using capital letters. You did great Amelia keep it up :))<br /><br /> Mary Peauahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16838331725223642879noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3463250069567625977.post-59092995667675028342017-11-17T10:31:41.066+13:002017-11-17T10:31:41.066+13:00Kia Ora Amelia,
I think you should improve on the...Kia Ora Amelia,<br /><br />I think you should improve on the timing of your sayings and use capital letters. I liked your backdrops and your sprites. Keep it up!<br /><br />TelesiaTelesiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07471396683344953048noreply@blogger.com