tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3463250069567625977.comments2017-11-17T10:39:11.983+13:00AmeliaGlenbrae Blogshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16371474947404269992noreply@blogger.comBlogger22125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3463250069567625977.post-73965715755904143672017-11-17T10:39:11.983+13:002017-11-17T10:39:11.983+13:00Hi Amelia,
Your Story is good but I think you shou...Hi Amelia,<br />Your Story is good but I think you should work on getting the right timing and using capital letters. You did great Amelia keep it up :))<br /><br /> Mary Peauahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16838331725223642879noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3463250069567625977.post-59092995667675028342017-11-17T10:31:41.066+13:002017-11-17T10:31:41.066+13:00Kia Ora Amelia,
I think you should improve on the...Kia Ora Amelia,<br /><br />I think you should improve on the timing of your sayings and use capital letters. I liked your backdrops and your sprites. Keep it up!<br /><br />TelesiaTelesiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07471396683344953048noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3463250069567625977.post-47264487053817887922017-11-13T11:32:13.457+13:002017-11-13T11:32:13.457+13:00Hi Amelia, my name is Aimee I really like your sli...Hi Amelia, my name is Aimee I really like your slide show about chocolate milk and how you said it was healthy But maybe next time you could add more detail and maybe describe the taste of it. But overall its fantastic!<br /><br />see yaAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3463250069567625977.post-8158305834792447172017-11-10T12:05:06.973+13:002017-11-10T12:05:06.973+13:00kia ora my name is shilah i think this is really c...kia ora my name is shilah i think this is really cool and creative.Shilahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17090236507146331903noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3463250069567625977.post-89072257533385391082017-07-31T10:00:37.513+12:002017-07-31T10:00:37.513+12:00hi I like about your writing hi I like about your writing ameliahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06563397473462108397noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3463250069567625977.post-23964648544474328792017-07-26T12:49:34.216+12:002017-07-26T12:49:34.216+12:00Hi Amelia, my name is Taylor and I’m from Kawakaw...Hi Amelia, my name is Taylor and I’m from Kawakawa Primary School. I really liked your slide about the chocolate milk and how you said it was really healthy for children. I love chocolate milk! Next time maybe you can put some more detail into describe the way it tasted and the price of it. I have no tips that I can help you with because it’s all good. Please feel free to check out my blog any time any daykpstaylorb.blogspot.co.nztaylorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00687770206744103337noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3463250069567625977.post-64622293173256879192017-06-14T09:29:15.250+12:002017-06-14T09:29:15.250+12:00I like how you learnt about life jackets and doggy...I like how you learnt about life jackets and doggy paddle. I know you will learn some more. So keep up the great work Amelia.Mariahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07005062231566166589noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3463250069567625977.post-2349053467287295922017-05-29T11:56:06.317+12:002017-05-29T11:56:06.317+12:00Hi Amelia my name is Aimee and im from Blake town ...Hi Amelia my name is Aimee and im from Blake town school. I love the tagul art you created. My class room did tagul art too. there are so many different words about you! keep up the awesome work<br />byAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3463250069567625977.post-87333480060735152442017-05-05T11:52:04.759+12:002017-05-05T11:52:04.759+12:00Hi Amelia
I think that you must like chocolate mi...Hi Amelia<br /><br />I think that you must like chocolate milk and I do to I love chocolate milk but I'm not to sure as mush as you. and I think that it is healthy.<br /><br />From reubenReubenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09294887437738338315noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3463250069567625977.post-12206736947416941012017-04-18T11:28:49.797+12:002017-04-18T11:28:49.797+12:00Hi Amelia,
I like your idea of creating a healthy...Hi Amelia,<br /><br />I like your idea of creating a healthy chocolate milk! I love having chocolate milk as a treat.Danni Stonehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12705580027546152790noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3463250069567625977.post-46173728557706026962017-04-18T11:27:09.265+12:002017-04-18T11:27:09.265+12:00Hi Amelia,
I was so impressed that you were able ...Hi Amelia,<br /><br />I was so impressed that you were able to put the story in order so quickly! Danni Stonehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12705580027546152790noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3463250069567625977.post-61934112369616276082017-04-18T11:25:52.762+12:002017-04-18T11:25:52.762+12:00Hi Amelia,
I love the tagul that you have created...Hi Amelia,<br /><br />I love the tagul that you have created - it has so many words about you!Danni Stonehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12705580027546152790noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3463250069567625977.post-10030419378274162312017-02-21T10:41:32.085+13:002017-02-21T10:41:32.085+13:00Hi Amelia im Aimee from Blaketown school. It sound...Hi Amelia im Aimee from Blaketown school. It sounds really fun and cool to watch virtual reality. You must of had lots of fun. I think it would be really fun to watch virtual and thinking that its really happening in real life life. <br /><br />By keep up the awesome work.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3463250069567625977.post-38770848173924651872017-02-21T10:40:14.326+13:002017-02-21T10:40:14.326+13:00This comment has been removed by the author.Sarahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03314103302404632052noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3463250069567625977.post-71002816135018487072017-02-21T10:36:01.499+13:002017-02-21T10:36:01.499+13:00This comment has been removed by the author.Sarahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03314103302404632052noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3463250069567625977.post-41936979861947871132016-08-24T09:41:55.286+12:002016-08-24T09:41:55.286+12:00Hi Amelia good on you for doing your basket boat b...Hi Amelia good on you for doing your basket boat blog and i like the way how you write about the basket boat and i really like the photo of it.<br />Mary Peauahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16838331725223642879noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3463250069567625977.post-52552303996009509522015-11-17T09:26:50.744+13:002015-11-17T09:26:50.744+13:00hi me your a cool girl by Amelia I love
my blog hi me your a cool girl by Amelia I love <br />my blog Ameliahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02209187859616707673noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3463250069567625977.post-70986195882675378752015-11-03T10:00:07.984+13:002015-11-03T10:00:07.984+13:00Well done Amelia, you've found lots of example...Well done Amelia, you've found lots of examples of AAAWWUBBIS and fanboys in the writing. Remember to write a sentence at the beginning of a blog post to tell your reader what your blog is about. That you were finding the sentence structure features in the writing sample. Otherwise, people might think that you wrote the story. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12658394260939273477noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3463250069567625977.post-1107886188588431062015-10-16T12:47:44.814+13:002015-10-16T12:47:44.814+13:00Amelia i like your writing Amelia i like your writing Ameliahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02209187859616707673noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3463250069567625977.post-3887466493219954942015-07-25T15:37:06.128+12:002015-07-25T15:37:06.128+12:00Nice work on the poem Amelia, I love the taste of ...Nice work on the poem Amelia, I love the taste of Pizza too! Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12658394260939273477noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3463250069567625977.post-15105291687383862382015-07-12T18:02:13.640+12:002015-07-12T18:02:13.640+12:00well done Amelia I really like your recount. Lovin...well done Amelia I really like your recount. Loving the rest kept it up.Danny Shttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08249895893871071971noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3463250069567625977.post-56591915832852869062015-06-16T13:48:07.431+12:002015-06-16T13:48:07.431+12:00Congratulations on your blogpost Amelia, I'm g...Congratulations on your blogpost Amelia, I'm glad you enjoyed playing the balloon game with the other girls. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12658394260939273477noreply@blogger.com