I am a Year 8 student at Glenbrae School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 7 and my teacher is Mrs. Tofa.
Kia Ora Amelia,I think you should improve on the timing of your sayings and use capital letters. I liked your backdrops and your sprites. Keep it up!Telesia
Hi Amelia,Your Story is good but I think you should work on getting the right timing and using capital letters. You did great Amelia keep it up :))