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Kia Ora Amelia,I think you should improve on the timing of your sayings and use capital letters. I liked your backdrops and your sprites. Keep it up!Telesia
Hi Amelia,Your Story is good but I think you should work on getting the right timing and using capital letters. You did great Amelia keep it up :))
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Kia Ora Amelia,
I think you should improve on the timing of your sayings and use capital letters. I liked your backdrops and your sprites. Keep it up!
Telesia
Hi Amelia,
Your Story is good but I think you should work on getting the right timing and using capital letters. You did great Amelia keep it up :))
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